Lots of great descriptive words in your recount Yuvaan. You can tell you put a lot of thought into it. I like that you used similes too. I pictured the mouse jumping back to the bush really fast!
What colour was the mouse? Do you know how long it was in the house? Did you use cheese to try and trap it?
Hey Yuvaan
ReplyDeleteLots of great descriptive words in your recount Yuvaan. You can tell you put a lot of thought into it. I like that you used similes too. I pictured the mouse jumping back to the bush really fast!
What colour was the mouse? Do you know how long it was in the house? Did you use cheese to try and trap it?
Keep up the good work
Kia ora Yuvaan,
ReplyDeleteI love your interesting vocabulary- my favourite is hover! You also used a lot of similes and that created a picture in my mind.
What would your next writing challenge?
Looking forward to future blog posts,
Miss Laxa