Kia Ora Yuvaan I like the way that if you press left or right arrow it will switch the presentation. This reminds me of when I did my haiku last year. you could try making a haiku with someone sitting on a bench or something.
Thank you Thomas. You don't have to press the right or left arrow key, it moves itself. I remember when you did the haiku last year. Sadly I was in India last year that time. Yuvaan rm22 NWS
Great poem.. I really liked the last line of your poem talking about the waves saying hi. It can kind of feel like that sometimes. i think that is called personification. Remember your capital letters, sometimes i forget them too when I'm posting comments..
Kia Ora Yuvaan I like the way that if you press left or right arrow it will switch the presentation. This reminds me of when I did my haiku last year. you could try making a haiku with someone sitting on a bench or something.
ReplyDeleteThank you Thomas. You don't have to press the right or left arrow key, it moves itself. I remember when you did the haiku last year. Sadly I was in India last year that time.
ReplyDeleteYuvaan rm22 NWS
Hey Yuvaan
ReplyDeleteGreat poem.. I really liked the last line of your poem talking about the waves saying hi. It can kind of feel like that sometimes. i think that is called personification. Remember your capital letters, sometimes i forget them too when I'm posting comments..
Hi Yuvaan,
ReplyDeleteI like your haiku.
It reminds me of the haikus and summer poems we did last year.
From Anna
Thank you Anna.
DeleteThis also reminded me of the haikus from last year.
Sadly I wasn't there that time😭.
Yuvaan rm22 NWS
Oh Okay.
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